In written English usage, a comma splice or comma fault is the use of a
comma
The comma is a punctuation mark that appears in several variants in different languages. Some typefaces render it as a small line, slightly curved or straight, but inclined from the vertical; others give it the appearance of a miniature fille ...
to join two
independent clauses. For example:
The comma splice is sometimes used in literary writing to convey a particular mood of informality. It is usually considered an error in
English writing style. Some authorities on
English usage consider comma splices appropriate in limited situations, such as informal writing or with short similar phrases.
Description
Comma splices are rare in most published writing, but are common among inexperienced writers of English.
''
The Elements of Style
''The Elements of Style'' (also called ''Strunk & White)'' is a style guide for formal grammar used in American English writing. The first publishing was written by William Strunk Jr. in 1918, and published by Harcourt in 1920, comprising eight ...
'' by
William Strunk Jr. and
E. B. White advises using a
semicolon
The semicolon (or semi-colon) is a symbol commonly used as orthographic punctuation. In the English language, a semicolon is most commonly used to link (in a single sentence) two independent clauses that are closely related in thought, such as ...
, not a comma, to join two
grammatically complete clauses, or writing the clauses as separate sentences. ''The Elements of Style'' notes an exception to the semicolon rule, preferring a comma when the clauses are "very short and alike in form," or when the sentence's tone is "easy and conversational." For example:
Comma splices are similar to
run-on sentences, which join two
independent clauses without any punctuation or a
coordinating conjunction
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such as ''and'', ''but'', ''for'', etc. Sometimes the two types of sentences are treated differently based on the presence or absence of a comma, but most writers consider the comma splice a special type of run-on sentence. According to ''
Garner's Modern English Usage
''Garner's Modern English Usage'' (GMEU), written by Bryan A. Garner and published by Oxford University Press, is a usage dictionary and style guide (or " prescriptive dictionary") for contemporary Modern English. It was first published in 1998 ...
'':
Comma splices often arise when writers use
conjunctive adverbs (such as ''furthermore'', ''however'', or ''moreover'') to separate two independent clauses instead of using a coordinating conjunction.
In literature
Comma splices are also occasionally used in
fiction
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,
poetry
Poetry (from the Greek language, Greek word ''poiesis'', "making") is a form of literature, literary art that uses aesthetics, aesthetic and often rhythmic qualities of language to evoke meaning (linguistics), meanings in addition to, or in ...
, and other forms of literature to convey a particular mood or informal style. Some authors use commas to separate short clauses only. The comma splice is more commonly found in works from the 18th and 19th century, when written prose mimicked speech more closely.
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The New Fowler's Modern English Usage'' describes the use of the comma splice by the authors
Elizabeth Jolley and
Iris Murdoch:
Journalist
Oliver Kamm wrote in 2016 of novelist
Jane Austen
Jane Austen ( ; 16 December 1775 – 18 July 1817) was an English novelist known primarily for #List of works, her six novels, which implicitly interpret, critique, and comment on the English landed gentry at the end of the 18th century ...
's use of the comma splice, "Tastes in punctuation are not constant. It makes no sense to accuse Jane Austen of incorrect use of the comma, as no one would have levelled this charge against her at the time. Her conventions of usage were not ours."
The author and journalist
Lynne Truss
Lynne Truss (born 31 May 1955) is an English author, journalist, novelist, and radio broadcaster and dramatist. She champions correctness and aesthetics in the English language, which is the subject of her 2003 book, '' Eats, Shoots & Leaves: ...
writes in ''
Eats, Shoots & Leaves'' that "so many highly respected writers observe the splice comma that a rather unfair rule emerges on this one: only do it if you're famous." Citing
Samuel Beckett
Samuel Barclay Beckett (; 13 April 1906 – 22 December 1989) was an Irish writer of novels, plays, short stories, and poems. Writing in both English and French, his literary and theatrical work features bleak, impersonal, and Tragicomedy, tra ...
,
E. M. Forster, and
Somerset Maugham, she says: "Done knowingly by an established writer, the comma splice is effective, poetic, dashing. Done equally knowingly by people who are not published writers, it can look weak or presumptuous. Done ignorantly by ignorant people, it is awful."
Notes
References
Further reading
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* {{cite news , title=The dreaded comma splice , url=https://www.economist.com/blogs/johnson/2012/01/punctuation , newspaper=
The Economist
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, date=10 January 2012
External links
''The Elements of Style'' full text of Strunk's 1918 edition
English grammar
Punctuation