''Comedians'' is a play by
Trevor Griffiths, set in a
Manchester
Manchester () is a city and the metropolitan borough of Greater Manchester, England. It had an estimated population of in . Greater Manchester is the third-most populous metropolitan area in the United Kingdom, with a population of 2.92&nbs ...
evening class for aspiring working-class
comedian
A comedian (feminine comedienne) or comic is a person who seeks to entertainment, entertain an audience by making them laughter, laugh. This might be through jokes or amusing situations, or acting foolishly (as in slapstick), or employing prop c ...
s. It was first performed at the
Nottingham Playhouse on 20 February 1975, in a production directed by
Richard Eyre. The cast included
Jonathan Pryce
Sir Jonathan Pryce (born John Price; 1 June 1947) is a Welsh actor. He is known for his performances on stage and in film and television. He has received numerous awards, including two Tony Awards and two Laurence Olivier Awards as well as nom ...
as the main character, Gethin Price,
Stephen Rea and the comedian and music hall performer
Jimmy Jewel
James Arthur Thomas Jewel Marsh (4 December 1909 – 3 December 1995),Gifford, Denni''The Independent'', 5 December 1995. Note: This obituary wrongly gives the year of birth as 1912, which is contradicted by the Ben Warriss obituary. Retrie ...
as the teacher.
[''Trevor Griffiths: Plays 1'', Faber 1996] The play deals with political issues such as sexism and racism.
Setting
The play is set in the bleakness of 1970s Manchester, changing scene from a school classroom to a social club and back again. Various evening classes take place in the classroom, including a stand-up comedy course taught by Eddie Waters, a retired comedian.
Plot
Act 1
The play opens in a classroom on a rainy night, where the school caretaker is cleaning graffiti off a blackboard. Gethin Price, a young man, enters and begins to shave. One by one, Phil Murray, George McBrain, Sammy Samuels and Mick Connor file into the room, as they discuss their outfits for later that night. Eddie Waters, the teacher of their stand-up comedy evening class, comes in. Eventually Ged Murray completes the class, and they swap jokes and begin to warm up. Later on, they will perform in front of Bert Challenor, the President of the Comedy Federation, who has come up from London to scout for talent. Waters takes exception to a misogynistic rhyme told by Price, and takes the opportunity to denounce sexist, racist and other such forms of comedy, explaining that they feed on ignorance and "starve the audience". Mr Patel, an Asian man, walks into the room, having mistaken this class for a different one. Waters welcomes him and allows him to stay in the room. Waters then makes the stand-ups recount a serious story from their past, creating a tense and emotional atmosphere. Breaking into this, Challenor enters and greets the men who will perform for him tonight. He gives some words of advice about what he is looking for, in stark contradiction to the lessons Waters has been trying to teach, and leaves. In his wake, the men have frantic arguments over whether to change their act to please the scout.
Act 2
The action moves to the club, the scene of the men's performances. First on is Mick Connor, who delivers a routine based on his identity as an Irishman in England, staying true to his previous stand-up. Next up is Sammy Samuels, who offers a fast-paced collection of jokes about women and sex, as well as satirising his Jewishness. He has sold out for a shot at fame. Thirdly, the brothers Ged and Phil Murray begin a chaotic performance in which they have an argument onstage about their act, resulting in a dismal failure. Then George McBrain tells a range of racist and sexist jokes. Lastly, Gethin Price comes carrying a tiny violin and bow, dressed in a bizarre mime-style outfit. After crushing the violin, he launches into a
kata
''Kata'' is a Japanese word ( 型 or 形) meaning "form". It refers to a detailed choreographed pattern of martial arts movements. It can also be reviewed within groups and in unison when training. It is practiced in Japanese martial arts ...
and other
kung fu
Chinese martial arts, commonly referred to with umbrella terms Kung fu (term), kung fu (; ), kuoshu () or wushu (sport), wushu (), are Styles of Chinese martial arts, multiple fighting styles that have developed over the centuries in Greater Ch ...
exercises. Two shop mannequins, a man and woman, are illuminated in the corner. Price begins a crazed conversation with the dummies before stabbing them and shouting a stream-of-consciousness monologue. He plays
The Red Flag on another, unbroken violin, and leaves. The Club Secretary restarts the bingo.
Act 3
The comedians are back in the classroom after the show. Samuels and McBrain attack Price for his surrealist routine, while Connor, Ged and Phil feel dejected after their performances. Challenor enters and assesses the men act by act. Connor and the Murray brothers are admonished, while Samuels and McBrain are praised for their stereotyped jokes that titillate the audience. He reserves the strongest condemnation for Price, who he describes as "aggressively unfunny" and "repulsive". After summarising, Challenor reveals that he will take Samuels and McBrain under his wing, and exits. Most of the men leave for the pub, and only Waters, Price and Mr Patel remain. Waters tells Price that his act was brilliant, and goes on to tell an emotionally charged anecdote about performing comedy during the Second World War in
Bielefeld
Bielefeld () is a city in the Ostwestfalen-Lippe Region in the north-east of North Rhine-Westphalia, Germany. With a population of 341,755, it is also the most populous city in the administrative region () of Detmold (region), Detmold and the L ...
. Price leaves, the men parting on good terms. Finally, Mr Patel tells a joke to Waters, and they exit the classroom.
List of characters
*Eddie Waters: a retired comedian who now teaches stand-up at evening classes
*Bert Challenor: a retired comedian, now President of the powerful Comedy Federation
*Gethin Price: a man in his early twenties, aspiring stand-up
*Phil Murray: a man desperate to get out of working-class life, aspiring stand-up
*Ged Murray: Phil's brother and comedy partner, aspiring stand-up
*George McBrain: a Northern Irishman, aspiring stand-up
*Mick Connor: a Southern Irishman, aspiring stand-up
*Sammy Samuels: a Jewish man, aspiring stand-up
*Club Secretary: a man who runs the club at which the comedians perform
*Caretaker: an old, gnarled man
*Mr Patel: an Asian man who enters the classroom by mistake
Stage productions
World premiere
''Comedians'' was first presented at the
Nottingham Playhouse on 20 February 1975, directed by
Richard Eyre.
Cast:
*
Jonathan Pryce
Sir Jonathan Pryce (born John Price; 1 June 1947) is a Welsh actor. He is known for his performances on stage and in film and television. He has received numerous awards, including two Tony Awards and two Laurence Olivier Awards as well as nom ...
as Gethin Price
*
Stephen Rea as George McBrain
*Louis Raynes as Sammy Samuels
*
Tom Wilkinson
Thomas Geoffrey Wilkinson (5 February 1948 – 30 December 2023) was an English actor. Known for his roles on stage and screen, he received numerous accolades including a BAFTA Award, a Golden Globe Award, and a Primetime Emmy Award as well ...
as Mick Connor
*
Jimmy Jewel
James Arthur Thomas Jewel Marsh (4 December 1909 – 3 December 1995),Gifford, Denni''The Independent'', 5 December 1995. Note: This obituary wrongly gives the year of birth as 1912, which is contradicted by the Ben Warriss obituary. Retrie ...
as Eddie Waters
*
Dave Hill as Ged Murray
*James Warrior as Phil Murray
*
Talat Hussain as Mr Patel
*Ralph Nossek as Bert Challenor
*John Joyce as Club Secretary
*Richard Simpson as Caretaker
American premiere
The play moved to
Broadway during the 1976/77 season, and ran at the
Music Box
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for 145 performances. The production was virtually recast.
Milo O'Shea
Milo Donal O'Shea (2 June 1926 – 2 April 2013) was an Irish actor. He was twice nominated for the Tony Award for Best Actor in a Play for his performances in ''Staircase'' (1968) and '' Mass Appeal'' (1982).
Early life
O'Shea was born and ...
now played the teacher, but Jonathan Pryce retained his role and he was the only British actor in the first American production. He won the
Tony for Best Featured Actor in a play. It was directed by
Mike Nichols
Mike Nichols (born Igor Mikhail Peschkowsky; November 6, 1931 – November 19, 2014) was an American film and theatre director and comedian. He worked across a range of genres and had an aptitude for getting the best out of actors regardless of ...
, who was nominated for the Tony as Best Director of a play.
Revivals
''Comedians'' was revived by Bickerstaffe Theatre Company in 1999, and it went on to win the Best Production of the Dublin Theatre Festival in that year. It was directed by Jimmy Fay, and the actors were Brian de Salvo, Dan Gordon, Karl Shiels and Aidan Kelly.
''Comedians'' was revived
off-Broadway
An off-Broadway theatre is any professional theatre venue in New York City with a seating capacity between 100 and 499, inclusive. These theatres are smaller than Broadway theatres, but larger than off-off-Broadway theatres, which seat fewer tha ...
in 2003, with
Jim Dale as the teacher,
Raul Esparza
Raul, Raúl, Raül, and Raüll are forms of a common first name in Italian, Portuguese, Romanian, Spanish, Galician, Asturian, Basque, Aragonese, and Catalan. The name is cognate of the Anglo-Germanic given name Ralph or Rudolph and the French ...
as the student comedian, and
David McCallum as the agent.
A London revival opened at the
Lyric Theatre, Hammersmith
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Background
The Lyric Theatre ...
on 7 October 2009,
at the beginning of the Artistic Directorship of
Sean Holmes. The production starred
Matthew Kelly
Matthew Kelly (born David Allan Kelly, 9 May 1950) is an English actor and television presenter. Having been trained as a theatre actor, he first came to public prominence as a television sitcom actor, game-show panellist and television prese ...
as the teacher Eddie Waters,
Keith Allen as the agent Bert Challenor. The rest of the cast was
Mark Benton
Mark Benton (born 16 November 1965) is an English actor and television presenter known for his roles as Eddie in '' Early Doors'', Howard in '' Northern Lights'', Martin Pond in '' Barbara'' and the eponymous Frank Hathaway in '' Shakespeare & H ...
,
Reece Shearsmith,
David Dawson,
Billy Carter,
Michael Dylan,
Kulvinder Ghir
Kulvinder Ghir is a British actor, comedian and writer. He is best known as one of the cast members in the sketch show '' Goodness Gracious Me'' (1998–2015). He is also known for playing Aslam in the Yorkshire-based film '' Rita, Sue and Bob ...
,
Simon Kunz,
Paul Rider and
Nick Williamson.
Television productions
A 25-minute extract from the play was screened as part of BBC2's ''2nd House'' arts strand on 15 March 1975, directed by Richard Eyre and Ben Rea, with the selected members of the original stage cast:
*Jimmy Jewel as Eddie Waters
*Jonathan Pryce as Gethin Price
*Stephen Rea as George McBrain
*James Warrior as Phil Murray
*David Hill as Ged Murray
*Tom Wilkinson as Mick Connor
*Louis Raynes as Sammie Samuels
*Richard Simpson as Caretaker
A 95-minute version of the full play was adapted for the ''
Play for Today
''Play for Today'' is a British television anthology drama series, produced by the BBC and transmitted on BBC1 from 1970 to 1984. During the run, more than three hundred programmes, featuring original television plays, and adaptations of stage ...
'' strand, broadcast on 25 October 1979, produced and directed by Eyre.
*
Bill Fraser as Eddie Waters
*Jonathan Pryce as Gethin Price
*
John Barrett as Caretaker
*James Warrior as Phil Murray
*
Derrick O'Connor
Derrick O'Connor (3 January 1941 – 29 June 2018) was an Irish theatre and character actor who trained at East 15 Acting School, London.
Life and career
O'Connor was best known for his performance as South African mercenary Pieter Vorstedt i ...
as George McBrain
*
Linal Haft as Sammy Samuels
*
David Burke as Mike Connor
*
Edward Peel
Edward Peel is an English television and stage actor. He was described by ''The Times'' in 2010 as a "veteran star of TV dramas" and "a familiar face on television for the past 40 years".
Early life and education
Peel trained as an actor at R ...
as Ged Murray
*
Ralph Nossek as Bert Challenor
*Moti Makan as Mr Patel
*Mike Henson as Concert Secretary
References
External links
*
* {{IBDB title, 3875
TV Cream review of the Play for Today production
1976 plays
Broadway plays
English plays
Manchester in fiction