An altar poem is a
pattern poem in which the lines are arranged to look like the form of an altar. The text and shape relate to each other, the latter usually giving added meaning to the poem itself. The tradition of shaped poetry goes back to Greek poets writing in
Alexandria
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before the
Common Era
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but most examples date from later and were written by European Christian poets during the
Baroque period.
Classical examples
Three poems in the shape of altars date from Classical times, starting from the turn of the Common Era, and refer to
Pagan altars, even though the last of the poets was a
Christian
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.
The name of the creator of the earliest poem is known to be Dosiadas, but there is no other information about him. As in some of the shaped poems written before it, the 18 lines propose a riddle to which the shape gives a clue. Containing recondite allusions to Greek mythology which have to be penetrated first, they begin “I am the work of the husband of the man-mantled queen, the twice young mortal,” by which one understands
Jason
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, husband of
Medea
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, who had once had to flee for her life in male disguise and who rejuvenated her husband by boiling him in a cauldron. The puzzle continues on for another sixteen longer and shorter lines arranged to represent an altar balanced on a pillared base.

The second poem is also in
Greek
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and was the work of Lucius Julius Vestinus, who describes himself as “High-priest of Alexandria and all Egypt, Curator of the Museum, Keeper of the Libraries of both Greek and Roman at Rome, Supervisor of the Education of
Hadrian
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, and Secretary to the same Emperor.” The 26 lines of the poem represent the altar's self-referential soliloquy, but the initial letters of the lines are also an
acrostic
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that spell out a complimentary message to the Emperor.
Finally there is a poem written in Latin by
Publilius Optatianus Porfyrius
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dating from the first quarter of the 4th century. In this the altar describes its construction as “polished by the craft of the poet's musical art (''fabre politavitis artem musica'')…I am straightly confined and hold back my edges as they attempt to grow and then, in the succeeding portion, let them spread more broadly." It then elaborates in an equally self-descriptive way. The poem has been judged to be 'undoubtedly a direct imitation of “Jason’s Altar”' by Dosidas.
The English Baroque
Poems in the form of an altar reappear in the Baroque period, written by educated authors who had come across the shaped poems preserved in the
Greek anthology. At the very beginning of this period, an altar was found to be a convenient shape for an epitaph, as in the anonymous tribute in Greek to the poet
Philip Sydney
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in the ''Peplus Illustrissimi viri D. Philippi Sidnaei'' (1587), and there are later examples of such epitaphs in English by
William Browne and
Robert Baron.
There was an even earlier altar poem in Latin dating from 1573 by the English Catholic Richard Willis. Turning away from pagan associations, his poem declares itself “an altar of the Christian religion”. In its presence, Willis represents himself as "Reborn in the holy/ washing of baptism"; though tried by perilous exile, he will keep the faith to the end. The dedicatory poems to
King James the First
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, prefacing
Joshua Sylvester
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Sylvester was the son of a Kentish clothier. In his tenth year he was sent to school at King Edward VI School, Southampton, where he gained a knowledge of French. ...
’s 1604 translation of a Christian epic by
Du Bartas
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, occupy a position midway between Pagan and Christian. They are arranged as altar shapes centred upon each of the Classical
Muses
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, but chiefly their names are only used as markers of the various aspects of the poem recommended to the king.

Most modern commentaries reflect on how altar poems of the period relate to the best known example,
George Herbert
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’s "
The Altar
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" (1633). An earlier anonymous example in Francis Davison’s ''Poetical Rhapsody'' (1602), the address of a rejected lover, approximates the form of George Herbert. A cross-rhymed
octosyllabic The octosyllable or octosyllabic verse is a line of verse with eight syllables. It is equivalent to tetrameter verse in trochees in languages with a stress accent. Its first occurrence is in a 10th-century Old French saint's legend, the '' Vie de ...
quatrain
A quatrain is a type of stanza, or a complete poem, consisting of four lines.
Existing in a variety of forms, the quatrain appears in poems from the poetic traditions of various ancient civilizations including Persia, Ancient India, Ancient Gre ...
is supported by three 4-syllabled quatrains which have as base another octosyllabic quatrain. Herbert’s is quantitively different, however. It is rhymed throughout in couplets and has lines of differing length (a
pentameter
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followed by
tetrameter
In poetry, a tetrameter is a line of four metrical feet. The particular foot can vary, as follows:
* ''Anapestic tetrameter:''
** "And the ''sheen'' of their ''spears'' was like ''stars'' on the ''sea''" (Lord Byron, "The Destruction of Sennacher ...
) at the head which are reversed at the base. His poem is also more serious in tone, for all that it is built on an extravagantly Baroque
conceit An extended metaphor, also known as a conceit or sustained metaphor, is the use of a single metaphor or analogy at length in a work of literature. It differs from a mere metaphor in its length, and in having more than one single point of contact be ...
. His altar, he declares, is constructed from a broken, stony heart that is offered as a sacrifice to God.
A nearly contemporary poem by
William Bosworth
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He belonged to a family (whose name is sometimes spelt Boxworth) of Boxworth
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(written about 1628, although not printed until 1651) matches the form of Herbert’s altar exactly. It appears untitled near the end of the “Haemon and Antigone” episode in his ''The Chaste and Lost Lovers'', beginning with the lines “Those that Idalia’s wanton garments wear/ No Sacrifices for me must prepare”. There too is a repetition of the word ‘altar’ in connection with the word ‘sacrifice’ which, more logically than in Herbert, appears on top of the altar.
Edward Benlowes
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The son of Andrew Benlowes of Brent Hall, Essex, he matriculated at St Johns College, Cambridge, on 8 April 1620.
On leaving the university he travelled with a tutor on ...
’ poem “The Consecration”, in his ''Theophila, or Loves sacrifice: A divine poem'' (1652), was dissimilar in form from Herbert, but was surrounded by a drawn outline to make the likeness to an altar clearer, as happened in some later editions of Herbert's poem. In the last quarter of the century appeared Samuel Speed's verbally “servile imitation” of Herbert, also titled “The Altar”, in his ''Prison Pietie'' (1677).
The taste for this kind of production was now over in any case.
John Dryden
''
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satirised the Baroque taste in his “
Mac Flecknoe
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” and
Joseph Addison
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singled out Herbert's “The Altar” and its companion piece, “
Easter Wings”, as a false and obsolete kind of wit. In Germany, too, where there had been a similar craze,
Johann Leonhard Frisch
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composed some extreme examples, including an altar bearing a flaming heart, as satires upon the style.
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exhibits
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See also
*Carmen figuratum
''Carmen figuratum'' (plural: ''carmina figurata'') is a poem that has a certain shape or pattern formed either by all the words it contains or just by certain ones therein. An example is France Prešeren's "Zdravljica", where the shape of each s ...
*Concrete poetry
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References
* Dick Higgins
''Pattern Poetry: Guide to an Unknown Literature''
State University of New York, 1987
* Mary Ellen Rickey
''Utmost Art: Complexity in the Verse of George Herbert''
University of Kentucky 1966
* Bart Westerweel
''Patterns and Patterning: A Study of Four Poems by George Herbert''
Amsterdam 1984
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Graphic poetry
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