"A Secret Vice", also known as "A Hobby for The Home", is a lecture first presented by English philologist and author
J. R. R. Tolkien
John Ronald Reuel Tolkien (, 3 January 1892 – 2 September 1973) was an English writer and philologist. He was the author of the high fantasy works ''The Hobbit'' and ''The Lord of the Rings''.
From 1925 to 1945, Tolkien was the Rawlinson ...
in 1931. The lecture concerns Tolkien's relations with and view on
constructed languages
A constructed language (shortened to conlang) is a language whose phonology, grammar, orthography, and vocabulary, instead of having developed natural language, naturally, are consciously devised for some purpose, which may include being devise ...
, in particular on
artistic languages. In the talk, Tolkien discusses the human desire to make languages, and his criteria to create a good language – these include
phonoaesthetics (the beauty of sounds) and the presence of a
mythology
Myth is a genre of folklore consisting primarily of narratives that play a fundamental role in a society. For scholars, this is very different from the vernacular usage of the term "myth" that refers to a belief that is not true. Instead, the ...
to accompany the language. Tolkien's presentation was the first instance of him openly exhibiting his hobby of conlanging, and includes examples of several of his languages.
The talk was first published in essay form in 1983, in
an anthology of Tolkien's previously unpublished works edited by his son,
Christopher
Christopher is the English language, English version of a Europe-wide name derived from the Greek language, Greek name Χριστόφορος (''Christophoros'' or ''Christoforos''). The constituent parts are Χριστός (''Christós''), "Jesus ...
. In 2016, an extended edition was published, with material missing from earlier versions, new manuscript material, and a collection of essays concerning Tolkien and constructed languages. This version was edited by
Dimitra Fimi and Andrew Higgins, receiving largely positive reviews from both
Tolkien scholarship and
the fandom.
Background
Tolkien began his interest in
conlanging, the art of inventing languages, when he was a teenager; he had previously used Animalic, a language created by his cousins. Tolkien helped to create ''Nevbosh'' with a cousin, a
code
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based on English with concepts from French and Latin included. Tolkien's following solo work, ''Naffarin'', was largely drawn from Spanish and Latin. During adolescence, he learnt the
international auxiliary language
An international auxiliary language (sometimes acronymized as IAL or contracted as auxlang) is a language meant for communication between people from different nations, who do not share a common first language. An auxiliary language is primarily a ...
of
Esperanto
Esperanto (, ) is the world's most widely spoken Constructed language, constructed international auxiliary language. Created by L. L. Zamenhof in 1887 to be 'the International Language' (), it is intended to be a universal second language for ...
, keeping a notebook in the language aged 17.
Contents
Tolkien begins the lecture by clarifying its topic as concerning artistic languages, as compared to international auxiliary languages; he briefly discusses his admiration for Esperanto, and the need for a unifying international language. He then attempts to categorise these languages by their level of complexity. The lower stages of this hierarchy comprise
language games
A language game (also called a Cant (language), cant, secret language, ludling, or argot) is a system of manipulating spoken words to render them incomprehensible to an untrained listener. Language games are used primarily by groups attempting t ...
; Tolkien writes that this type of language is not art in the same way as more developed ones, and that they are crude in their simple use for secrecy or fun.
To illustrate this, the example of Animalic, a language built solely from
animal names, is given. Tolkien argues that the invention of this is an example of the linguistic ability of humans, and that a more developed form of this ability manifests itself in several forms: in
polyglotism,
poetry
Poetry (from the Greek language, Greek word ''poiesis'', "making") is a form of literature, literary art that uses aesthetics, aesthetic and often rhythmic qualities of language to evoke meaning (linguistics), meanings in addition to, or in ...
, and in
conlanging. To show the next stage in his hierarchy, he uses ''Nevbosh'', which showed examples of
sound change
In historical linguistics, a sound change is a change in the pronunciation of a language. A sound change can involve the replacement of one speech sound (or, more generally, one phonetic feature value) by a different one (called phonetic chan ...
and
alternation, as well as a fledgling appreciation of
phonaesthetics. He discusses his joy of language invention, its lack of recognition as an
art form
The arts or creative arts are a vast range of human practices involving creative expression, storytelling, and cultural participation. The arts encompass diverse and plural modes of thought, deeds, and existence in an extensive range of me ...
, and subsequent lack of publicity by practitioners.
For the next level of development, Tolkien deems a distinction between practicality of
communication
Communication is commonly defined as the transmission of information. Its precise definition is disputed and there are disagreements about whether Intention, unintentional or failed transmissions are included and whether communication not onl ...
and pleasure in sound-making as necessary. Examining his own language, ''Naffarin'', a language partly inspired by ''Nevbosh'', Tolkien notes that it has more developed
phonetics
Phonetics is a branch of linguistics that studies how humans produce and perceive sounds or, in the case of sign languages, the equivalent aspects of sign. Linguists who specialize in studying the physical properties of speech are phoneticians ...
, moving away from its
source languages, and shows his style of conlanging. He states that
a successful artistic language requires a
constructed mythology among other stipulations, and lists attractions to conlanging:
philological
Philology () is the study of language in oral and written historical sources. It is the intersection of textual criticism, literary criticism, history, and linguistics with strong ties to etymology. Philology is also defined as the study of ...
experimentation, and
grammatical experimentation with the creation of
engineered languages
Engineered languages (often abbreviated to engelangs, or, less commonly, engilangs) are constructed languages devised to test or prove some hypotheses about how languages work or might work. There are at least three subcategories, philosophical l ...
. To end, Tolkien gives several examples of
his poetry in
Quenya
Quenya ()Tolkien wrote in his "Outline of Phonology" (in '' Parma Eldalamberon'' 19, p. 74) dedicated to the phonology of Quenya: is "a sound as in English ''new''". In Quenya is a combination of consonants, ibidem., p. 81. is a constructed l ...
and
Noldorin
Sindarin is one of Languages constructed by J. R. R. Tolkien, the constructed languages devised by J. R. R. Tolkien for use in his fantasy stories set in Arda (Tolkien), Arda, primarily in Middle-earth. Sindarin is one of the many languages spoke ...
, concluding the lecture by likening artistic languages to a form of poetry, and conlangers to poets.
Publication
''A Secret Vice'' was first presented as a lecture to the
Samuel Johnson
Samuel Johnson ( – 13 December 1784), often called Dr Johnson, was an English writer who made lasting contributions as a poet, playwright, essayist, moralist, literary critic, sermonist, biographer, editor, and lexicographer. The ''Oxford ...
literary society at
Pembroke College, Oxford
Pembroke College, a constituent college of the University of Oxford, is located on Pembroke Square, Oxford. The college was founded in 1624 by King James I of England and VI of Scotland, using in part the endowment of merchant Thomas Tesdale ...
on 29 November 1931 at 9pm
– it was the first time that Tolkien made his views of language creation and phonoaesthetics public.
The manuscript for the talk was later revised for a possible second presentation around twenty years later. Although the original manuscript for the talk gave its name as ''A Hobby For The Home'', the minutes of the Johnson Society record the lecture's name as ''A Secret Vice
'' – this name was applied to it by Tolkien's son Christopher; Tolkien then used the name.
The essay was first published in print in the 1983 ''
The Monsters and the Critics and Other Essays'', which was edited by Christopher. This version omitted material from the original speech, such as a description and glossary of Tolkien's language ''Fonwegian'', an
a posteriori
('from the earlier') and ('from the later') are Latin phrases used in philosophy to distinguish types of knowledge, justification, or argument by their reliance on experience. knowledge is independent from any experience. Examples include ...
and a priori mix, using grammatical elements from Latin, and a phonology from English.
This was left out of the 1983 edition because it was written in pencil in the original manuscript, and it was therefore not clear that it was intended to be part of the main lecture.
HarperCollins
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published a 2016 hardback extended
critical edition
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titled ''A Secret Vice: Tolkien on Invented Languages'' edited by
Dimitra Fimi and Andrew Higgins. This included the full text of the lecture,
as well as several essays, including a previously unpublished "Essay on Phonetic Symbolism" on
sound and language by Tolkien, and manuscript work related to the lecture. The introduction of the book includes five essays surrounding the lecture and its context, entitled:
# "Myth-making and Language Invention"
# "Theorizing Language Invention"
# "The Languages of Middle-earth"
# "'A Secret Vice' and Its Immediate Context"
# "'A Secret Vice' and the Larger Context"
After the introduction, full text, and Tolkien's notes for the lecture,''
'' including the original
minutes
Minutes, also known as minutes of meeting, protocols or, informally, notes, are the instant written record of a meeting or hearing. They typically describe the events of the meeting and may include a list of attendees, a statement of the activit ...
of the Johnson Society meeting,
the book concludes with a two-part coda. The first part, ''The Reception of Tolkien's Invented Languages'', discusses the history of the study of Tolkien's languages or "Tolkenian Linguistics". The second, ''Imaginary Languages for Fiction: Tolkien's Legacy'', discusses Tolkien's impact and legacy on artistic languages, looking at languages used in popular media since the publication of ''The Lord of The Rings.''
According to Fimi, the critical edition included around 4,500 words of previously unpublished writing by Tolkien.
Reception
The Norwegian linguist and Tolkien scholar
Helge Fauskanger
Helge Kåre Fauskanger (born 17 August 1971) is a Norwegian author and philologist. In Norway he is known as a crime novelist; elsewhere, he is best known as a Tolkien scholar with an interest in Tolkien's constructed languages.
Education
F ...
wrote: "In 1931, Tolkien wrote an essay about the somewhat peculiar hobby of devising private languages. He called it 'A Secret Vice'. But in Tolkien's case, the 'vice' can hardly be called secret anymore."
Fauskanger sees as significant Tolkien's statement in "A Secret Vice" that "The making of language and mythology are related functions", and that "Your language construction will ''breed'' a mythology."
John Garth wrote that ''A Secret Vice'' showed that "language creation, for Tolkien, was an act of gorgeous, individualistic rebellion in an era of barbarous conformity."
Cheryl Cardoza comments that the essay showed Tolkien's "integral relationship between linguistic invention and mythic core" and that "Tolkien’s creation of these categories
f artistic languagesin “A Secret Vice” shed light on the mistakes made by ... other fiction authors." Cardoza views ''A Secret Vice'' as containing "a recipe for achieving ... depth" and that it was his application of the set of rules Tolkien outlined in the essay that allowed the realism of
Middle-earth
Middle-earth is the Setting (narrative), setting of much of the English writer J. R. R. Tolkien's fantasy. The term is equivalent to the ''Midgard, Miðgarðr'' of Norse mythology and ''Middangeard'' in Old English works, including ''Beowulf'' ...
.
Of the 2016 edition

''A Secret Vice: Tolkien on Invented Languages'' received largely positive reviews: Nelson Goering praised the editors in the ''
Journal of Tolkien Research'' for their "excellent job of making clear the dynamic nature of these languages", calling the book "a very significant publication... a largely well-edited and learned presentation of important material by Tolkien."
In ''
Tolkien Studies
The works of J. R. R. Tolkien have generated a body of research covering many aspects of his High fantasy, fantasy writings. These encompass ''The Lord of the Rings'' and ''The Silmarillion'', along with Tolkien's legendarium, his legendarium t ...
'',
Arden R. Smith called the work "a welcome addition to the family of expanded editions of Tolkien's shorter works", praising the editorial essays, but criticised "various infelicities "in the
Elvish texts and poetry.
Jason Fisher, in ''
Mythlore
''Mythlore'' is a biannual (originally quarterly) peer-reviewed academic journal founded by Glen GoodKnight and published by the Mythopoeic Society. Although it publishes articles that explore the genres of myth and fantasy in general, special a ...
'', gave a more critical review, writing that the level at which the book was written excluded readers with less thorough knowledge of Tolkien scholarship: "this book is not intended for readers who are new to the subject." Fisher also criticised the lack of an index, omission of Tolkien's annotations for his poem "Olima Markirya", and lack of information surrounding Fonwegian. He additionally disagreed with the scope of the piece with the relative lack of material relating to Tolkien and Esperanto. Despite this, he termed it "a welcome bounty of new material to reckon with and ... an invaluable start".
Garth gave a summary of the book in ''
New Statesman
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'', writing "It’s a mishmash, with something for the Elvish buff and something for those who enjoy unlikely cultural collisions."
Ed Fortune in
''Starburst'' magazine gave a positive review, and commented: "Editors Dimitra Fimi and Andrew Higgins have done much to preserve the sense of the work... Those fascinated with Quenya and all things Middle Earth will be especially delighted by this work... this is the definitive work on Tolkien’s relationship with words."
Dennis Wilson Wise viewed the book as an improved "go-to text", praising the "rigorous endnotes" and the "solid contributions being made to the field by this volume". Wise also questioned some of the book's claims as "overstatements", as well as the book's limited area of study, which omitted material on Tolkien's relationship with Esperanto.
See also
* ''
English and Welsh
"English and Welsh" is J. R. R. Tolkien's inaugural O'Donnell Memorial Lecture of 21 October 1955. The lecture sheds light on Tolkien's conceptions of the connections of race, ethnicity, and language.
Publication
It was first published in ''An ...
,'' another lecture by Tolkien discussing language
Notes and references
Notes
Citations
External links
Tolkien's Not-So-Secret Vice further information about Tolkien's relationship with constructed languages
Full textof the short version of ''A Secret Vice'', as given in the 1983 collection ''
The Monsters and the Critics, and Other Essays''
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Essays by J. R. R. Tolkien
Constructed languages resources
1930 speeches
2016 books
Books about constructed languages